Wufei Beating The Shit Out Of Treize

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Because I'm incredibly creative with titles.

So this was originally gonna be a scene in Special Needs until it turned into a psych ward fic. It may still be in there somewhere, but with very different context or at least setting. So I feel safe posting this. (Actually I might end up only turning in the Duo and Zechs picture for the Big Bang and the prequel chapter that goes with it. The fic itself is not related enough to the theme.)

For those of you who don't know, I have a penchant for flipping pairings on their heads-- meaning the ones who are usually considered sub are put into dom position and vis-versa. And if anyone deserves that, it's Wufei.

So, this is Wufei taking out some long held-in anger on Treize. As my friend Ren put it, "This is all of Wufei's rage, from Meiran's death to this point, coming out in every single blow." And I think that sums up what I was going for beautifully. Now, make no mistake about it, this is completely consensual. Trezie agreed to this. Wufei is not being abusive. (Though I have found that my Wufei is extremely manipulative and can be controlling when he wants to be.)

I know a few things are off about this. But the thing that bothers me the most?.... The freaking shelves. They are completely unorganized. You put the aftercare stuff on one shelf, the restrains on one, the impact play on another... Man. As soon as Treize is taken care of and tucked nicely into bed to recover Wufei is coming straight back here and reorganizing those damn shelves.

Also please appreciate the rug. I like that rug. That is a lovely rug. That rug came out so beautiful.... I'm a little tired.

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Feedback is always appreciated, especially on big pieces like this, and ESPECIALLY on the characters, their expressions, and what you think is going on/going through their heads. In the end that's my goal. So hearing what you think lets me know if I'm doing it right. Also don't be afraid to give constructive criticism, especially on anatomy because herp-de-derp I'm not that good with it all the time.